(This story is part of a circular horror trilogy. The other two parts are called Memories and Little Jimmy. They can be read individually and in any order)
Dear Margareth.
I write you today with heavy heart. There’s no easy way to put this, so I’ll write it down directly. Little Jimmy drowned in the well. We do not know what he was doing there or how he fell in. We searched for him all night and found him the next day. I am so sorry.
We are, of course, all very sad. Times are hard, but we try to take care of each other and especially of little Lisa. The loss of her brother has been hard on her. Now she has no one to play with.
The Summer has been dry, and the harvest scarce, but we’ll manage. I’m a bit worried about my beloved Mary’s health, she lies in bed all day. We all pray she will get better soon.
Yours truly Gottleb.
Dear Margareth.
I hope you are well. Thank you for your letter and your concern. I am sorry to tell you there’s more bad news. Mary died a couple of weeks ago after a long time of sickness. She suffered a lot, I hope she is better now where ever she is. The winter is hard, and we do not have much food left. The harvest failed, and the animals are slaughtered, they would have starved to death anyway. I and little Lisa are doing the best we can, but we are worried. We’ll probably find a way, maybe we will have to leave.
Yours truly Gottleb.
Margareth put the letter down on the table. She needed to go and see them.
She asked her employer for some days off, and she took the train across the country to the small village where the local church was. The farm was still far away, and it was cold. Snow covered the land.
She got a ride out to the farm, and got off. The postman would come by in a couple of days, and she could speak to him about getting back.
She paid and said goodbye, and walked into the house. There was no one there. Hopefully her brother and his daughter had gotten into town, although no one there had heard from them.
A smell came from upstairs. She looked in all the rooms. Nothing. A hatch in the ceiling lead up to the attic. She pulled it down, the ladder fell out. The stench was unbearable. She climbed up slowly.
Her brother was hanging by his neck in a rope attached to the ceiling fess. His face was dry, his eyes almost popping out of their sockets. There was a letter on the table.
To whom it may concern.
These are my last words. The hunger has taken my mind. I’m no longer a child of God, I’ve become a monster. I do not deserve to live, so I’ve decided I will take my punishment in the after life. In the end she died for nothing, my dear little girl. At least she was delicious.
Good bye, cruel world. Good bye.
Gottleb Reichardt
http://scary-story.com/entry/death/2014/09/29/the-last-letter.html
http://armorgames.com/play/15353/the-last-door-chapter-1-the-letter?tag-referral=horror
Part Two please! Gottleb’s Ghost! Margareth Goes Mad! Anything!
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Haha! Gottleb comes back to eat you all… Thanks!
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Not me! I have a fridge with his name on it.
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Your fridge’s named Gottleb?
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It will if Gottleb tries to eat me.
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Second part is up! Tomorrow there will be a third 😉
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He must have been awfully hungry!
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He was. He was very, very hungry. And sad. Some people need to eat when they’re sad.
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I know the feeling!
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Oh my, I wasn’t expecting to come out of this laughing. Sweetly pivoted, my friend.
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Thanks Jac! I laughed a bit myself at the end 😀
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So… If I get you right… You’re going to eat Gottleb?
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My, my sweet and sour dish with Gottleb an fries.
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All served and ready!
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So are my knife and fork.
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Oh my goodness! This was disturbing and brilliant!
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Thank you! Very happy to have provoked disturbance 😉
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OUCH!
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Gottleb! What have you done? 😀
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Loved this!
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Great 🙂 Thank you!
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You’ll laugh! Had to stop near the end, but as always, loved the art!!! Cheers, Your big fat baby fan. Ha! 🙂
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Noooo! The end is the best part! Haha! Thanks for being here 🙂
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AWWWW man! I may have to buck up and dive in to the end!! I love Your writing though! Just a big old scardy cat!!!! I’ll try….. 🙂
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You be careful 😀
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Goodness gracious. I legitimately felt a shiver down my spine at the end! I really felt intense emotion the entire time I was scrolling through it. Great job! Your short story setups leave me wanting more 🙂
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Thanks a lot! Gottlebs dead, though. Not much more he can do 😉
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True! But about that juggling story.. :p ahemmm
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Haha! Thanks 🙂
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I let out a high-pitched “eeeeeeeeee!” This one is truly creepy, kudos!
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Excellent story. I thought your use of points of view was creative: your character telling the story through letters then a switch to third-person limited…very cool. Your painting is great too: light and shadow make it very dramatic.
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Thanks Eduardo! The darkest parts was in grey tones at first, but I messed it up, so I lay on black to hide it 😀 I was about to start over, but I think it worked out OK in the end.
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DUDE! Awww man! God. Laughing…but…GOD!!! 🙂
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Haha! God seems to have left Gottleb’s little farm a long time ago… 😀 Thank you!
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Apparently so! Ha! 🙂
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These letters are rather depressing and horrific indeed.
No wonder people no longer write letters anymore but have turned to text messaging instead.
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Text messages do not get as sinister, do they…
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How horrific!
Very well written.
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Thanks a lot! It wasn’t really meant to be more than this one, but it kind of kept evolving in my mind…
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“At least she was delicious.” Yikes!
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He’s quite sinister, Gottleb.
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