You walk a path you know from your past. As you walk, it grows, gets longer, deeper. When you arrive at the end of the forest, the field that appears is not the same as in your memories. The little house on the other side looks a bit like your grandma’s house, but your grandma didn’t live by a lake, and her house had more windows. Crossing the field you feel it changing, merging with the house you saw in that movie so many years ago, when you were still a child. Slowly it glides into something new, something different, a cabin you’ve never seen before. Or have you?
The man who opens the door is kind of like your neighbour, but your neighbour is nothing like Henry Chinaski, and he has no dog. You sit down in a chair, and the walls tell stories of a sullen past with scattered moments of joy and laughter. You realise the dog is really a cat, and it has its story too, just like the old man, just like the house, just like you.
Then something horrible happens.
Writing is quite a bit like dreaming sometimes.
https://orchidslantern.org/2017/07/30/the-gardener/
https://writingontangents.com/2017/11/22/every-day-im-chasing-after-that-feeling/
Or being on drugs.
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Some authors do indeed write on drugs… Or drunk. Like Henry Chinasky ‘s author, who used to drink three bottles of whine a day. Writing very well, too.
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I’m pretty sure that after three bottles of wine, I’d be writing gibberish…if I could remain conscious.
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Wow a great story.
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Thank you 🙂
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Welcome
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Lovely visual as always.
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Thank you 🙂
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You’ve captured the dream like quality well. Do you think of the visual first or the story?
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Usually the idea is written before sketched, but not always. Then the drafts and sketches evolve simultanousley, a little of each.
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I kind of like the idea of it working as a whole rather than a story with an illustration. A character walking through the dreamscape of your painting works very well
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Thank you 🙂
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I make comics as well, although my project is kind of in the state of standby. There’s a link on the end of my Gallery (in the menu). It’s only in Spanish and Norwegian for now, though.
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Know the feeling!
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I bet you do! 🙂
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You tend to surprise me every now and then! Lovely imagery! Smooth writing! Great!
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Thank you very much 🙂
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You’re welcome!
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Oh God! Wait for it…..wait for it…………….. 😳
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😀
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Or like a trip on hallucinogenic drugs. 🤪
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Which would be… A bit like dreaming 😀
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This flows well, and I like the last line. I think you could rework it into a story! The plot motif of the mysterious house.
minor edit: should be “reali[z]e”
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That is indeed a good idea. The seed is set, we’ll see how it grows 😉 Thanks!
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Wow….. Some real absurd switching of scenarios there….. But it truly is just like dreaming… Absurd but amazing
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Thank you! My dreams are more or less like that, and the ideas in my head slides back and forth as I write in a similar way 🙂
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I can’t even express how much I love this 🙂
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Thank you so much 🙂
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