He was waiting for his father. His Dad. One of the hunters.
The swift machines came gliding through the big opening they called the Gape.
One day he would be a hunter himself, he thought. One day, when he was proven worthy.
Another machine came by, yet another could be seen in the sky.
The little planes came through, in from the world outside, the Vast. One by one they flew by. His father was not among them.
The sun went down. Small lights lit up the cave like little stars. No more planes arrived.
He ran down the ladders, down the staircases, over the bridges leading towards the landing platforms. The riders were getting off their machines. As he came closer he could see their faces.
Their eyes were dark, their mouths shut tight.
A hunter had not made it home.
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Excellent story and art!
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Thank you!
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Nice. The Rift between worlds. A good theme full of possibility.
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Thank you. I started out with the illustration, and made the story from that, making some notes to get to know their world in the process. Happy you liked it.
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A sad ending. I could feel his anxiety growing as he waited for his father.
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Thanks. They live in a hard world.
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Beautiful pictures – both the painting and the words.
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Thank you.
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The art for this is fantastic!
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Thanks a lot!
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Hey! I LOVE Your artwork soooo much. You never cease to amaze me and You just gave me chills!!! Hope all is well with You and Your sweet little family! Cheers!!! 🙂
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Thanks! Hope you’re well as well 🙂
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My pleasure!!! And yes, thanks! All is fine my way! 🤗❤️😊
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A lovely image for such a mournful moment. Excellent pairing, my friend!
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Thanks a lot 🙂
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A lovely story with an emotional ending. So good…
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Thank you.
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Your artwork is amazing!! You have talent!!!
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Thanks a lot, appreciated.
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You’re welcome!!
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