Another rock fell from the roof. The tunnel was shaking.
-So the time has come, said Bargan.
-We have to get out of here! His grandson Bilk was looking up the tunnel.
-There is no out of here. The tunnels and the halls are the world. Where would you go?
-There has to be some place somewhere. There has to be!
-The tunnels further down have already fallen. We knew the end was coming, even before the war. We’ve won, but the prophecy we cannot defeat. The world will fall. The tunnels will be destroyed. It is inevitable.
Bilk went home to his tent. He refused to accept there was no way. Yes, they could not fight the Fall, but they could run. There had to be somewhere they could run.
He grabbed his pickaxe and went walking, upwards through the tunnels. The life giving roots were hanging from the walls. The roots. Where did they come from? Why were they there? He had been thought not to ask such questions, not to question the ways of the Creature they lived inside. He had never really believed in the Creature. They just seemed like walls to him.
He went up to highest tunnels known. He walked through tribes and villages, all scared by the quakes shaking their world. High up, above the last village, he started pulling a root.
It didn’t budge.
He found some other roots. He pulled them. Kept searching. A root gave in. He took his pickaxe, picked and dug. He could feel a draft from a small tunnel opening on the side of the root. Air, fresher than what he was used to. It smelled different. He started digging. Soon another tunnel emerged on the other side. He opened the hole enough to climb through, and started walking upwards.
The tunnel stopped, but the roof above was softer than in the Tunnels of the Dona tribe, the roots were more numerous. The earth shook again. He fell. He climbed up again, started digging, pulling the roots, cutting.
An opening emerged.
Above he saw something he had never imagined. Something more beautiful than anything he’d ever heard of. Thousands, millions of little sparks were shining above him, so far away he could not even begin to understand. They were like the noble rock of the deeper tunnels, but their light was not reflected by his torch. They shone all by themselves.
Tears were running his cheeks. His jaw was shaking. This was beyond anything anyone had ever believed.
He ran back to tell them all. They would have to see it for themselves.
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Nice spring story! I love the comparison of the stars to the glittering stones.
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Thanks! A new spring for Bilk’s people for sure 🙂
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Let there be light!
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And there was light. Imagine how they will feel when the sun comes up 😀
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A real Spring awakening! Great story! 🙂
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I hope he didn’t damage the tree’s roots too severely. I was imaging that he would undermine the tree so badly, the tunnels around the roots would collapse and the tree would fall in killing them all.
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Haha! That could have been interesting. But no, happy ending this time 🙂
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Good for you. Kind of reminds me of the climax scene from George Lucas’ (yes, “Star Wars”) very first film “THX-1138”.
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He’s left the world of underground caves and found our world above.
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It could be. Or another. Or they could be us in a future so distant not even their legends remember, that the truth had been surpressed for some reason.
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Sort of a futuristic retelling of Plato’s Allegory of the Caves.
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So long underground. I’m thinking some disaster drove them there centuries ago and they’ve forgotten the world above – until now!
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That might be the reason they are there indeed.
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Great storytelling! I love your description of the stars.
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Thanks a lot, Magarisa 🙂
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You’re welcome. 🙂
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Great peace. What I like most is the emotions we feel while reading the text. It touches us.
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Thank you very much 🙂
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Great piece. What I like most is the emotions we feel while reading the text. It touches us.
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Thanks for checking out a few recent posts. I’m glad you enjoyed them. I appreciate it.
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