Tired of running, you stand before a formless mass of faces. Tentacles are reaching out for you, grabbing you. Pulling you down. Tearing you apart.
Memories. Times of freedom, of fresh air. Memories of lost dreams. An acid snake crawls up your spine as you grasp the depth of the moment. You’re back. This time there will be no escape.
A face twisted in pain rises above you. You can hear moans of thousands of tortured minds as its hideous mouth reveals the deep darkness inside.
No! you shout. Leave me alone!
But your voice drowns in the sea, floats away with all the others.
Stay with us, they say. Be one of us. Be like us. Be us.
Just when you finally thought you had made it.
Slowly you surrender. Let yourself be sucked back into the horrors you once belonged to. Trapped by the monster you’ve tried so hard to escape, a shadow falls upon you, upon your life, your future. It devours you body, your mind, your essence. All you are, all you would ever be.
You’ve lost. Society has made another claim, one more piece of flesh in the stream.
Been a while since I’ve seen you…
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It has. I stopped by yours a couple of times, but there was nothing there. I see there is now, though… Was I just unlucky?
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Still removing my posts after about 6 days. New content goes up. Then comes down. New content up right now and the story is moving right along…
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Seemes to to me that this guy iis an anarcist going back to his rotten roots, to the ugly world he came from, where he grew up with his petty bourgois family, with hard treatment, hard diciplin, sexual abusement and violence. Good luck to him…
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Haha! Maybe he did 😀 Or maybe he’s just back where we all are, trapped in a fucked up world… 😉
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Ooo so good. I think we can all get similar but different meanings from this. Really like the art too! 👏
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Thanks Arbie! Hopefully we can 😉
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a frightening piece of fiction with a hideous truth of its own
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It’s a hard life… 😀 Thanks, John! Happy to frighten you 🙂
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Great piece; really powerfully written.
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Thanks Chris! Feels quite different to write narrative from second person perspective.
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Darn that nine to five, just when you think you’ve escaped the rat race…
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Always breathing you in the neck…
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If you cannot go against the flow, mix in and undermine it from within ;). Very poignant, as usual!
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Thanks, Kate! Let’s hope he wins in the end 😀
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Hey!!! So nice to see You back around! I hope all is well with You and Yours! This was really cool. A great reminder to meditate and practice staying in the moment!!! 😳😄❤️
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Thanks! Always good to stay present 😉
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This is the truth we all try to avoid, the ever constant monster of the mundane.
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Indeed. Resistance seems futile. Thank you.
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