The sun was going down, painting the sky in a thousand colours reflected in the beautiful landscape below. In the city streetlights were coming on, one by one as the shadow of the hills slowly crept through the quarters. They could see the fields where they played as children, the mountains. The ocean. The vast sea stretching out, seemingly with no end. She had always dreamt of the ocean, the unknown beyond the waves.
Maybe some day he would take her.
They had been sitting there for a long time now, just staring into eternity. Feeling the silence. Breathing. Existing.
Darkness arrived. Stars emerged in the sky. Night was falling. The elegant flight of the swifts were replaced by the mysterious movements of bats. The crickets broke the silence behind them.
They sat close together, just the two of them. He felt good. Relaxed. Being there with the girl he loved. Things had been hard, but it was over now. They had finally escaped.
Her head fell to one side. He lifted it up, placed it back on his shoulder. He didn’t care if she was dead anymore. He didn’t care about the smell. They were together.
https://dralimanonlife.com/2018/04/02/pegman-best-intentions/
https://www.wattpad.com/26173159-poems-short-stories-the-sunset-a-short-story
Great writing Aak. 👍
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Thank you.
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You’re Welcome ⚘💕👍☺
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Just put a ‘clothespin’ over my nose! That was the result of your ‘flash’ – good build-up! ♥
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Thanks! The smell-detail was the last thing added… 😀
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So sad…
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I guess it is. Holding on when there’s no hope left.
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Oh no, it was so romantic up until the end!
And thanks for the link 🙂
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Thanks for having an inspiring blog 🙂
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Well, i wasn’t expecting that end. And that’s a good thing.
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Haha! Thanks 😀
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Reminds me of the overly attached girlfriend meme where she’s a zombie: http://knowyourmeme.com/photos/428234-overly-attached-girlfriend
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Haha! There’s a movie, actually, about just that… Let’s see… Burying the Ex, it’s called.
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Shocking ending!
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Thanks! 😀
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I was waiting for the twist and then BOOM! It hit me. Fantastic
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Thanks a lot. It would be quite boring if it was only a sunset…
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Very true. Keep on rolling them out man
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I’m wondering if I should worry that I anticipated that ending.
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Haha! Some people might say so 😀
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Fricken Hitchcock Bro. Creepy. But the description of the landscape was quite beautiful.
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Thanks, George! Just another romantic sunset.
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Nice ending!
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Thank you 🙂
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You really know how to non-chalanty and so very subtly introduce an eerie twist in the plot. Always makes me smile!
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Thank you Rishhuu! You just made me smile, too 🙂
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I commented on this one, although I had this yesterday because of the audio blogpost of today which I couldn’t listen to! Ha Ha.
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You can read the story in the link 😉
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I will. The links crete an error on my app.
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Hmmm… Maybe you should re-install it or something.
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Aah. I have an old OS on my iPad. I do read part of my feeds on PC, as well (like, right now).
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Lovely lyrical description, then a dark twist; all in a few lines. Great work!
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Thanks a lot!
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Duuuuddddeeeee!!!! 😅 This is probably one of my favorite pics. Man….beautiful! And I’m happy he’s happy. 🙂 Cheers!
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Thanks a lot, forresting! I actually thought of you when I wrote the end, remembering your comments on my story Letters 😀
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That’s so cool! I got to go along for the ride! Thanks for telling me! Cheers!!! 🙂
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This guy has serious psychological problems.
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He sure does. He probably should seek help as soon as possible.
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Where’s the zombie 🧟♂️ formerly known as Sigmund Freud (in his mortal life) when you really need him? 🤪
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Having read multiple stories of yours, I anticipated the ending. Things were going so well that I got suspicious. Too good to be true…
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Haha! It sure was. 😀
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