Look! Paladin said to his mother. A book with Grandpa’s handwriting!
Oh, my! Who would have known grandpa was a writer. And the name, “Tales of the Horror”. Haha! Your dark and sinister Grandpa…
They both laughed. Grandpa had been the funniest man alive, always cheerful and friendly. The only moment Paladin had seen him sad was the weeks after Grandma left him.
He sat down by the desk and started reading while his mother kept organising the old things in the attic. They would have to make a lot of trips out here the coming weeks, a lot of things had been piling up through a long life.
The first story was about a young man. It was a dark story, about how he murdered his little brother. Awesome, Paladin thought. He had always loved horror stories. He wish he’d known about this when his grandfather was still alive, they would have had even more to talk abut.
The next story was about a young woman bathing in the river. Someone was watching her from the shadows of the trees, lurking, waiting. Sneaking towards her as she was drying her naked body with her shirt. The knife cutting her skin. She was left floating face down in the river, the water flowing red.
He kept reading.
One story was about a man who murdered the neighbour’s kid. Lured him into his car with candy, drove him out into the countryside. Another about one who killed his wife, so beautiful, so gentle. He had murdered her because of her loving ways. Because he wanted to destroy a wonderful part of the world. He buried her in the garden by the apple tree. He had put a little stone on the grave, to remind him of the delicious, morbid murder. The apples hadn’t tasted the same since, it said. The murderer loved to give them to his grandson, thinking he was eating his grandma.
Paladin walked down the stairs, looked out the window. Stood there for a while. He went out.
Where are you going with the shovel? His mother was carrying some boxes out to the car. He didn’t answer.
He dug and he dug as the pile of dirt grew bigger, the hole deeper. He struck something. Something hard. He dug slower, more carefully. He could see something yellowish and round. He pulled it out of in the dirt. A scull. Bones.
His grandmother hadn’t left at all.
https://www.talesofmurder.com/short-stories/his-thirteenth-wife/
https://writerswrite.co.za/confessions-of-a-serial-killer-how-to-kill-characters-when-you-write/
😯ooh!!
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I saw the twist coming, but it was still awesome. Great story man
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Thanks. I know, I know. It was quite difficult to hide it. Happy you liked it 🙂
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I tell my grandson stories too, but I swear his Grandma is alive and well. Honest.
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Haha! Happy to here that, James. Some of your stories had me worried 😀
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And in none of them did I kill the missus. 😉
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😀 😀
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Oh my! That is deliciously dark 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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The is Stephen King Creepy! One of your better posts, imo! Great job, got my hair standing on end. Super loved it. I bet Paladin is the one who ate the apples too…eating his grandmother…ewwww!
(BTW, check out my latest post! Getting really good comments!)
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Thanks, George! That felt good to read. I will, don’t take it down til I have 😉
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Sounds good…
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Creepy is the operative word… Good one, FicSpawn…
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Oooh, nice👌
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Thank you 🙂
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Good Lord, scaaried me…btw, excellent writing
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Thanks a lot 🙂
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Yikes! How creepy!
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Grandpa wasn’t who they thought he was, it seems…
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What a traumatizing discovery for the family. You are a talented storyteller. 🙂
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Thanks a lot, Magarisa 🙂
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You’re welcome. What should I call you?
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What ever you want. Pick any part of my blogger name, for example 😉
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How ’bout… Fiction?
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Good idea. Thanks, Fiction!
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I bet Paladin lost his appetite for eating apples 🍎 🍏 after that.
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And he used to love them do much… 😀
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This was super amazing!
Loved your short stories, they’re thrilling!!
And specially the references you put, actually tells how much you dig into a topic before you write about it. That’s really nice 😊
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Thank you very much! Happy the links are appreciated. These two I found afterwards, though, but they are usually part of the research. The more links, the more research 🙂
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Agree to this point! 😊
Infact readers appreciate the honest references
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Ha! I saw that coming, as I grow wise to the way your mind works 🙂 Cool story, and quite a shock for Paladin as he remembers his happy fun grandpa!
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Thanks. I wanted to make it less obvious, even my regular readers, but I couldn’t find a way to do it…. Paladin was surprised, though 😀
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Well done. I was sucked into the story and never saw the twist.
If it was the shovel, it would have hit me in the back of the head!
Seek peace,
Paz
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Great! Good to know it surprised you, it was the effect I was looking for. Thanks a lot 🙂
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Gave me shivers!
Love the illustrations that go with your stories 🙂
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Thanks a lot! 🙂
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Although I saw it coming, this was beautiful. I think I’m a fan. XD
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Thanks a lot. I hope you will be 😉 Try this one: https://fictionspawn.com/2018/02/22/blank-canvas/
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Excellent twist! 😀
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Thank you, Ekaterina 🙂
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I love what you’ve done with Carter’s story, how you condensed and tightened it and brought in the grandchild. I love too that you acknowledge your sources. Respect
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Thanks! It’s not really based on Carter’s story, though. I found it afterwards, for further reading on similar subjects. But it could have been 🙂
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Nice twist!
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Thank you 🙂
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Holy spit! That ending was awesome
May I suggest that you don’t end with “The book was his grandfather’s diary.” I think “She hadn’t left at all.” is much more intense of a note to end on and you gave enough away in the story that the reader should be able to put two and two together.
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Hmmm… Not a bad idea. I tend to over-explain things sometimes 🙂 Thanks!
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😍😍👌🏾👌🏾
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Thank you! 🙂
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I write heartfelt short stories and poems which you might like reading. Its quirky and fun and grim! Give the blog a read! Link in bio ☺️
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Thanks, I will.
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That sent chills down my spine. Having a serial killer for a grandfather.
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Quite something to realise after his death… Thanks!
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Wow! Great story!
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Thanks!
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That weny fromm aww to HolY SHIT real quick😮😮
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Thanks! 🙂
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That was super creepy. I wasn’t sure where you were going with it, but that twist was wonderful. I’m looking forward to reading more of your stuff!
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Thanks a lot! Please do, and thank you for commenting.
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Damn…..I got chills!
It was really creepy 😨
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Thanks! Happy to hear that 🙂
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Still going at it I see (or read is a better term I guess). Loved this one. It was deliciously creepy indeed. Great work! 😊😊
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Thank you. Always creating 😉 Happy you stopped by.
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Brings a whole new meaning to relative eating!
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It does 😀
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