Soundtrack: Motörhead – Ace of Spades
The poker hall was rather empty. Some people at a couple of tables, but Perry wasn’t in the mood for poker today. He walked through to the dice tables. There was no space, all full. The slot machines. That was where he was going to win today. He was feeling lucky.
There was a new machine there. A Trip to Hell was written with colourful lights on the top.
Cool!
He threw in a couple of coins, pulled the lever. The wheels started rolling.
One gold sack.
Two gold sacks.
A pineapple.
He pulled again. No luck this time either.
Soon he had only one credit left, and no cash. Time to go home, it seemed. He pulled.
One devil.
Two devils.
Three devils.
Jackpot. The lights started flashing. The machine laughed. It sounded like it came from behind it, underneath it. An evil laughter of triumph.
The room started shaking. The ground opened underneath him. He fell. He fell through rocks and fire. He fell a long way.
He landed on a stone floor somewhere dark, far below. It smelled of sulfur and ashes.
Ha ha ha! The same laughter he heard when he won. Now it came from all around, from the darkness.
Who’s there?
A figure took form in the shadows. A demon. A devil. The Devil.
Congratulations! It said. You’ve won.
I figured that, Parry answered. The three demons were supposed to be the grand price. But where the fuck am I? And where’s my price?
The answer to those two questions is the same, my new little weak friend. You’ve won a trip to Hell! For all eternity! He smiled a bright smile as lights came on.
Perry looked around. There were people being torture everywhere. Up on the walls, storeys and storeys above, he saw demons having fun torturing lost souls.
Noooooo!!! Perry screamed. The despair took control. Tears were jumping out of his eyes.
What’s wrong? The Devil looked puzzled.
What’s wrong? I’m in hell! I’m going to be tortured for ever!
Ha ha ha ha ha ha! You silly little wimp! You’re not going to be tortured. You won the Jackpot. You’re staying with me!
The Devil put an arm on Perry’s shoulder and guided him through a big door. There was a party. A huge, crazy party. Naked women dancing on the tables, smiling and waving as he came in. People drinking, eating delicious food, gambling, laughing, doing all kinds of drugs. Anything Perry loved doing. An eternal hedonist orgy.
This wasn’t going to be that bad after all.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gambling
https://www.scientificamerican.com/article/how-the-brain-gets-addicted-to-gambling/
Great! I love the illustration, too.
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Thanks a lot! Good to hear from you 🙂
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I’ve been a bit of a hermit for the last month! Just catching up on the blogs I missed.
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Hopefully there will be something new on your blog soon too, then 😉
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Yes there will! It’s hard to update so often when writing a novel as well, but I’m definitely getting back to it for February.
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I’ll imagine. My blog is eating most of my time 🙂
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Looks like you’re doing really well with it, so worth the effort 🙂
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that’s a hell of a story.. LOL .. ( no pun intended ). sad to say most people live life this way and its a shame .. great story..
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Thanks! He gets to live it for all eternity, though…. 😀
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yikes…lol
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He landed in heaven!
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Haha, hahahaha! The two are easily confused 😀
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Favourite so far
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Awesome! Very happy to hear that 🙂
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Fantastic, I quite like this one
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Thank you 🙂
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Nice twist at the end, I definitely didn’t see that coming. And I approve of your backing music. 😉
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Good to know. The soundtrack came on simply because Motörhead was on all morning… hmmm… there might be a connection 😀
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Be careful what you wish for! 🙂 Good soundtrack for this story!
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Thanks! Sure is 🙂
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Interesting twist to this story.
Well done… like the torture victims now are on their grills.
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Thanks! In the first draft the story ended in despair, but I wasn’t really happy with it. I wrote it again, and kept writing, and this end came up. We can probably thank Lemmy for it 🙂
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Ha, lucky guy! And maybe if he’s really good (bad?) he’ll get to jab some people with hot pokers too!
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Haha! Maybe 🙂 A sparkling career as a demon…
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Yikes! Laughing. Well, I think I’d still be bummed out…but at least he’s happy!!! 🤣 Cheers!!! 🙂
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Forever is a loooong time 🙂 Thanks!
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Mwa ha ha ha ha ha….continues the laughter…sounding creepier and creepier with each passing millennia…..and how many orgies can one have before they become absolutely blasé? (and here I’d type a laughing face if my computer were playing along nicely!!! ) Cheers!!! 🙂
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Interesting question… I have no idea, really. If you ever try to find out, please let me know how it went 😀
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Ahhh…yeah….I’m too dull a person to ever venture….but if I hear tale I’ll let You know!!! 🙂
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Νice twist at the end. He landed in Hell masqueraded as Paradise. Destruction is dressed with sweet colours.
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Ir all depends on who you’re friends with, I guess 😉
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True, especially if the friends are wolves dressed in sheep’s clothing.
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Gee that is tempting but I can imagine after a century or two it tends to get old.
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Haha! I agree 😀
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I was waiting for the punch line, like last call. and the room is flooded with mess. the devil ain’t that nice, with him you always lose one way or another. still a good story, enjoyed the build up.
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Thanks.
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Fitting that the devil would offer such a prize. Well done.
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Thanks! I’ll imagine equality is not his thing 😀
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terrifically entertaining ; ending unexpected as it should be 🙂
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Thanks!
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