The rope was tied to the pole in the ceiling. The noose was tightly secured, an effective running knot. There would be a minimum of suffering.
He’d had enough. The voices in his head, the thoughts and feelings of others were driving him crazy. How they despised him. How he despised himself.
He moved the chair over, took a deep breath. Tears ran down his cheeks. Things hadn’t been the way he wanted it too. Depression, alcoholism. Insanity. It was too much to bear. He climbed up on the chair. Put the loop over his head. A dog barked outside.
He looked to the window. He could see it in the street. Feel its mind, understand its simple thoughts. He liked dogs, he remembered. Their thoughts were different from the ones of humans. More basic. Less judgmental. This one was lost. All alone in this hard world, just like him. Worse still, it was hungry.
He had some meat in the fridge. It would be wasted. He took the noose off, stepped down from the chair.
The dog looked at him as he opened the window. Images, memories of both food and violence went through its little mind as it saw the strange man in the window. Fear ran through it when the man threw something. Then happiness. The smell of meat. Salvation. Just for a moment, but the moment was all there was.
Morgan decided to leave. Get out into the wilderness, the harmonic tranquillity of nature. Find a cabin or something, where all he could hear was the thoughts of beasts and the silent humming of trees.
Hopefully the dog would want to come with him.
https://www.scientificamerican.com/article/brilliance-of-dog-mind/
http://www.iep.utm.edu/ani-mind/
http://documentaryheaven.com/mind-plants-intelligence-plants/
Love the direction this is going…the dog, needing more, could possibly save this butt-ugly lonely soul.
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Let’s hope so. I strongly believe whatever goes on in a dog’s mind has to be a lot nicer than most humans. Check out the documentary in the last link if you have time. You know I have a skeptic mind, but it’s very interesting.
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This time I did follow the link to the Scientific American Article. Excellent! Thanks! See…someone or something needs even the ugliest, most “useless” person…that’s my take-away!
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Dogs are good that way. Unconditional friendship. Good luck getting that from humans 😀
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‘He took the noose off, stepped down from the chair’, I love how you write the moments of transformation.
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Thanks, Jac! I’ve been looking for you! Do you publish anywhere lately?
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Hey! Nope. I’ve been swamped with work and study, the only writing I’ve done is academic. But the final few episodes of The Art of Drowning are in the immediate pipeline, and, mate, it’s so good to finally get back here.
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Good to hear from you 🙂 I’ll be reading.
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Jac is back? Wonderful!
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I am! Just popped over to see you, no posts. But it was good to stop by.
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What you missed was…mind blowing! (For me anyway…)I got record hits and record comments…just sayin’ …But your presence was missed. Now that you’re back…I’ll pick it up again…
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Makes me look forward to the book even more, my friend.
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Next segment begins with Jac Forsyth giving Paul a medical exam…just sayin’
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“the silent humming of trees” – great sentiment.
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Thanks! I got the idea of that phrase watching the documentary about plants in one of the links.
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A case of saved by the mutt, not the bell !
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Haha! He was! There’s nothing like a dog to keep you from suicide 🙂
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I’ve only cats, they’ll probably drive me to consider it lol !
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😀
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What a brilliant ending – hopeful but not overly sentimental. I really liked your portrayal of the dog, telling us what it’s thinking and how it’s feeling from one moment to the next.
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Thank you! He needed some light in his life, poor Morgan. The dog appeared in the last moment.
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Morgan and the dog saved each other. 🙂
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Dogs and humans go well together.
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Thrilling post. Loved the plot. Amazing one.
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Thank you. I had a good time investigating the downsides of telepathy 🙂
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He has found a better way out. Hopefully he’ll find peace away from it all, with only nature to intrude on his thoughts.
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I have a feeling he will. Thanks.
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A best friend, indeed! Sweetly and simply written. I loved it.
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Thank you Rummager! There’s nothing like the company of a dog 🙂
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Wonderful turn of events.
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Finally some brightness in Morgan’s life.
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In this case, a dog is truly a man’s best friend.
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In many cases 🙂
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What a beautiful twist you have created! 🙂
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Thanks! I wanted something better for him, life had just been too hard 🙂
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Well I think you gave him a very precious gift 🙂
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There’s nothing like the company of a dog 🙂
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They certainly make life feel a little more complete.
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