Today was Saturday, so he had all the day to do whatever he wanted. A fair was in town, so he stopped by it. He went alone. His friends were rather boring and only wanted to stay home and play video games.
He’s walking around, looking. People throwing stuff at tin cans to win stuffed animals. Music from loudspeakers, music from carousels, all mixed in a symphony of noise. Children everywhere, parents trying to keep track of them. Colours. Lights.
An old gypsy-woman comes walking up to him.
Do you want to know the future? Her eyes are glaring. He doesn’t want to know the future, and he definitely does not believe she could tell him. Here! A gift! He doesn’t want the gift, either. Usually they want something in return in his experience. He backs away. She grabs his hand and puts something in it. Be careful!
She disappears into the crowd.
He stood there, looking for her. She was gone. In his hand he held a crystal ball. Round and beautiful, the size of a big marble. It had small facets, plain surfaces, all the same size and form. Inside he could see something move, like if it had life. He peered closer.
He sees himself. He’s running down a slope. He has the same clothes he’s wearing right now. He falls, stays on the ground holding his hands on his leg. It seems to be broken.
This was either some kind of joke, or he just saw the future. He didn’t want that future, but the crystal ball was awesome.
He left the carnival. It had been fun for a while, but now he was tired. He wanted to go home. He wanted to get back to where he was living.
He started walking down the slope towards town, when he realized it was the slope from the vision. The slope he’d seen himself run down, where he’d fall and break his leg.
Haha! I’ve outsmarted you this time, future! He takes another way, crossing the big national road. He’s halfway across when he hears a loud low-frequence motor humming accompanied with a deep beeping sound. He turns. He sees a trailer coming at him at high speed. It’s the last thing he ever sees.
The crystal ball flew out of his hand and landed unharmed in the grass on the other side.
https://10000hoursleft.wordpress.com/2015/05/22/timeline/
https://mindfump.com/2017/03/15/62-oops-turned-into-nostradamus-2/
Dam! Happens every time! When I see the future, I do something to screw it up and make it worse!! I hate it when that happens!!
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Haha! It’s rather annoying, yes. Be careful!
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Predetermination is a vindictive bedfellow.
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If you’re meant for breaking something, you’re meant for breaking something. A leg is of the better options:)
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Haha, never a truer word spoken.
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So by averting the broken leg, he loses his life. Lousy trade off.
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Sure is. Don’t mess with destiny;)
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wow 🙂
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Thanks!
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I’d rather not know the future. Once you know, that already alters the naturalness of the present. Nicely done – thanks for linking to Timeline 😊
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I told you your story inspired me;) It didn’t really change it, but it gave me some extra energy to finish the editing. Which is quite a bit:) Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
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Thanks Aak 🙂 Your illustrations have inspired me to maybe try combining words and my own images one of these days. Catch you in the next post!
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You should! I find it very useful, especially for the idea process. Thanks!
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I will! I might start by illustrating the ‘timeline’ series. I’ll borrow from you and try ink on water colour. Thanks for the inspiration Aak 😊
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You’re welcome:)
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So taking decision about future is our choice.
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Beautiful story! It is really interesting to know about future, great ending.
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Thank you! Interesting and dangerous, at least in this case.
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True, Really dangerous!
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Crystal balls should come with a health warning
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They might in the future. “The use of crystal balls might lead to alernative futures you do not want”.
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“This crystal ball comes with trigger warnings”
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😀
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Mysterious and Interesting story. If one can’t change future, what is the purpose of knowing it ?
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Thank you. Maybe there is none;) He changed it though, but for the worse:)
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Isn’t it kind of similar to that one movie in which they say, “Those who look into their future have no future” …..or something like that…..
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Hmmm… Which movie is that?
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Sadly, I don’t remember. I’m sure it’s in my lists…..somewhere…
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Let me know if you find it;) Would be interesting to know. Anyway, similar subjects have been played with before for sure, the question whether or not if we can change our destiny is probably one of the oldest questions of all:) I do remember a movie where cyclops had given their other eye to see the future, but the only thing they could see was their own death. If they tried to change it, they would suffer horrendously. It might have been of inspiration to this one, but I do not remember the name right now.
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Extremely captivating!
That and I can see this becoming a supernatural episode😀
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Thank you!
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Ohhh the crystal ball may have tried to fool him 😉 Danger is part of learning the future! Great write
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Thank you! I guess you can’t outsmart destiny. At least not in this story:)
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Sorry, haven’t been around much. I’ve been staying home playing video games.
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I love when carnivals are used as sources of intrigue in fiction, especially when they are portents of sinister things to come like here. Enjoyed this!
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Great! I always had a thing for carnivals myself. Did you see the series Carnivale? It’s good. Thanks!
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Never heard of that one, might look it up sometime!
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It was one of the earliest high quality series, maybe the next after Twin Peaks. It’s all happening around a carnival, with heaps of magic and fanatics and stuff. They only made two seasons.
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Does sound good, I’ll have a check, maybe catch the first episode and see how it goes. Thanks!
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By “averting” the broken leg… or by believing the crystal ball.
Barnum(ish): Make America orb again. (See interview of a man who chose P.T. as fair inspiration for his life; see also very end of a recent Colbert show.)
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We’ll never know, I guess;) I had to look up P.T. Barnum. What does make America orb mean?
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I referred to Barnum because he’s mentioned in the Nostradamus (linked) article. Of course we could name any number of faith hoaxsters. It so happens that Trump, in an official interview, happily claimed P.T. Barnum as a model for his life. And, in the last few days, he joined a bunch of leaders of the House of Saud in putting hands on a glowing orb (or ball) [not to mention the arms deals]. So, one of our most famous comedians was telling jokes (in his opening monologue) about that bunch of people looking like comic book villains… and so on. Then, at the very end of the show (when the comedian walks to the back of the auditorium through the crowd and into sort of a lobby), there was a sign (reminiscent of MAGA campaign signs, playing on the wording of “Make America Great Again” [with Muslims, for one, as the supposed enemy or bogeyman to gain votes then] but putting “orb” in place of “great” — as we have to survive this traumatic presidency with humor) along with a spooky guy like you’d see wielding a crystal ball and so forth.
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I absolutely love this story. Great writing! I’m always careful… and let destiny be. 🙂
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Thanks a lot! You should;)
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http://www.businessinsider.com/r-trumps-encounter-with-glowing-orb-sets-alight-social-media-2017-5 The comedian I mentioned isn’t in this article, but it’s kinda* a fun read… with helpful pictures. (Note that orb can mean globe.)
[* This is slang grammar, not proper English… don’t want to lead you astray.]
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Haha! Some picture! 😀
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Okay, one more.
http://conjugator.reverso.net/conjugation-english-verb-orbs.html
https://pasttenses.com/orb-past-tense
http://www.definitions.net/definition/ORB
http://www.dictionary.com/browse/orb
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Thanks, Marleen! 🙂
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Great story!
Movie stars pay fortune tellers a great sum of money to see their future.. palm readers, crystal balls, and the like.. I read the Bible to know my future, and it hasn’t been wrong yet.. 🙂
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Thank you for commenting. I really prefer not knowing, but each one to their own;)
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Do you mean you prefer not knowing the future.. or that I read the future in the Bible? 🙂
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Haha! No, I meant I prefer not to know the future:) That you read the future in the Bible is an interesting little fact, but you be careful;)
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Wow Wow! When you see your future, you’re already altering it. Great story! Never gloat over winning against the odds; life has an odd sense of humor ;).
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